Diary of a Lone Avali [Discontinued]

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What's your opinion of the story so far?

  1. Great!

    66.7%
  2. Okay.

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  3. Decent..

    5.6%
  4. Needs more work.

    0 vote(s)
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  5. GIB MEH MOAR!!!

    38.9%
  6. Pinapple (You know who you are <3)

    22.2%
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  1. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    LOG 12 IS UP! That was... something to write. A lot more oomph that I had thought of initially.

    HUGE NOTE TO KNOW: You might be confused as to what happened in the log. You'll want to know about the avali to understand what happened in the newest entry. After you read it, check out the link in the spoiler!

    http://avali.wikia.com/wiki/Character_Creation_Tips
    It's in the Pack section that will explain everything right at the top of the page
     
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  2. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    On a side note: That spoiler name is why English is hard to learn.
     
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  3. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    Ok yeah just woke up because of an alert on my phone. Read log 12 and went "What the f**k is going on right now?" Went on computer and clicked on link and then went "Why the f**k is this even on there?" *scrolls down one* "OHHHHHHH!!" Still, half :lickitung: half :nurusnooze:
     
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  4. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    Exact same thing just happened to me :nuruundead:
     
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  5. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    Wait... you wrote that and didn't even realize it?
     
  6. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    No, I got a notification on my phone; I forgot to turn the ringer off.:nuruconfused:
    It sent me an email notification from a message earlier today, but was really the message you posted. So here I am replying half asleep, still in bed. :nurusnooze:
    Good night. :nurusnooze:
     
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  7. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Huh, What a minute. What about careless whisper. And no I'm not saying that cause the saxophone is erotic. Maybe.
    The lyrics for careless whisper is kind of interesting too.
     
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  8. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    It was the first lovey-dovey song that popped into mind, so it ended up being the one I posted. :rofl: That is a good song though!

    If I were to actually pick a song... hard to say actually. I don't listen to much lovey-dovey music.
    Maybe Undisclosed Desires or Resistance, both by Muse.



    EDIT: Resistance has my favour.
     
  9. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Oh, I see. Well I hope you made the right choice.

    Log 12 time.
    1. Nice spongebob reference
    2. You just described Nezun as a whore.
    3. I can't use "floran goes insane and kills off characters" cuz you just did it.
    (This post is a joke in a half.)
     
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  10. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    1. <3
    2. That I did.
    3. Mira hasn't gone off the deep end. Nezun had a huge snap doh. So that's something.
    (Someone caught on!)
     
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  11. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    I wasn't talking about Mira. But I'm glad to hear that it was all a dream.






    RIGHT!!
     
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  12. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    Wait, Nezun killed Dar'keth?
    Or permanently injured him?
     
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  13. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    Did she? :nurugasp:
     
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  14. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    Ehrmahghrd! Will Mira dump Nezun and fall in love with Dar'keth or something as such?
    Stay tuned to see the next dramatic log!
    Or will Mira dump Nezun and live a life of solitude?
    Either way, Mira will probably dump Nezun.
     
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  15. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    Hehe, we shall see. I'm working on the next log.
    After this one, things are going to pick up the pace a bit; I think.
     
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  16. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    Yay! I only want one thing for friday! For you to have the next one out!
    (But take your time. I dont need this next log being stupid.) :rofl:
    As in "Mira falling in love with dead corpse of Dar'keth stupid"
     
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  17. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Well, judging by the events of the latest log, I have come to the conclusion that Nezun is guilt trippy.
    Very guilt trippy.
    Dar'keth lines of dialogue may show why Nezun feels like this. She most likely had a relationship with one of her former pack members. Char.
    Knowing the "fun times" she had with Mira it would make sense that Nezun would call Char's name when Dar'keth mentions Mira.

    In the latest log, Dar'keth is essentially Nezuns subconscious

    This post may seem a bit choppy, mainly cuz I'm tired.
     
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  18. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    16-02-22-3.png Hmmmmm, has Dar'keth exposed Nezun?
    Will Mira dump Nezun? As I said before, Mira will most likely dump Nezun when Mira realizes Nezun already has someone, Char. Although we know nothing about Char, this will most likely become an issue. Not a great time to introduce any new characters, wich is why I think something really crazy will hapen and we'll be introduced to a new and interesting character. Or maybe Nezun's pack will come along and raise the tension ×10
     
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  19. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    I hope you're not too tired. Log 13 is up! :nuruhype:
    We shall see. :nuruninja:
     
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  20. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    OH MAH GHERD LOG THURTEEN IS UP?!?!? OF COURSE IM NOT F*****G TIRED!!!!!!!
     
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