Diary of a Lone Avali [Discontinued]

Discussion in 'Writing' started by Gilligan Lanley, Dec 20, 2015.

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What's your opinion of the story so far?

  1. Great!

    66.7%
  2. Okay.

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  3. Decent..

    5.6%
  4. Needs more work.

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  5. GIB MEH MOAR!!!

    38.9%
  6. Pinapple (You know who you are <3)

    22.2%
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  1. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    Private Message
     
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  2. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Mkay.
     
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  3. Lodish

    Lodish Black Hole Surfer

    I originally thought people read stories with their eyes.
    Not anymore.
     
  4. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    It was just a meme.

    A very stupid, silly, unfunny meme.
     
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  5. Lodish

    Lodish Black Hole Surfer

    What is the meme, the body thing or the eyes thing?
    me is slightly confused
     
  6. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    :poke:Silly Avali.
    Oh how little you know of our culture.

    It's the body.
    There... I now scarred this Avali for life.:p
     
  7. Lodish

    Lodish Black Hole Surfer

  8. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    *gives a steak*
     
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  9. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    My interwebz is down at home, so posting the newest chapter will be delayed; I can't send off my stories for proofreading (I forgot to put them on the USB so I can do it during my lunch break at work). I should have it up and running by tomorrow evening *fingers crossed* and have the story updated by Saturday. Hopefully. :nurushock:
     
  10. Lodish

    Lodish Black Hole Surfer

    Awwwww, gotta wait then :nurusad:
     
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  11. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    The suspense is real.
     
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  12. Lodish

    Lodish Black Hole Surfer

    Saturday is almost over and still no Log Entry 16 :c
     
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  13. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Sadface.
     
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  14. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

  15. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Rp mode:

    "Hey. I got eyes on the penguin King, should I take the sshot?"

    "Yes, we will be able to salvage the information regarding the next log entry."
     
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  16. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    It's been delayed. I didn't like the way it as turning out, so I scrapped it and started rewriting it. Work has also slowed down progress on it.

    PS. Karaoke is another reason for the delay. Too much fun, yo.
     
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  17. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    How will you find out if im dead?
     
  18. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    We'll salavage the info we need from your corpse.

    Yeah, were incompetent.
     
  19. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Karaoke huh?

    SLACKER!!!

    Hey guys!
    He a slacker yo!
     
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  20. Solar313

    Solar313 Fat Man

    My brain self destructs tho!
     
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