Deathcoil or Buzzip

Discussion in 'The Monster Monster Contest' started by Tay, Mar 13, 2012.

  1. Tay

    Tay Orbital Explorer

    **Deathcoil or Buzzip**
    (Unsure of the name, any ideas would be appreciated)​
    For as long as I remember, I have had a huge fear of wasps and bee's anything that sting's completely freaks me out, so my monster is based upon a Bee.​
    Known as *Deathcoil* This mysterious creature isn't shy, he likes to lounge about in flower patches, basking in the sun, When you stumble across this creature, he may at first seem harmless, even *cute*​
    You may find it hard to resist the urge to get closer to him, to take a closer peek. However when in *sleep mode* you would do best to keep your distance, for when you get too near, he may just get angry enough to do something about your intrusion.​
    *Deathcoil* does not tolerate his rest and relaxation being interrupted. He will open his eye, at which point his *lamp* will activate and flash brightly blinding his enemies. before springing from the dirt and hunt you down with his fearsome Drilling Tail and Beak.​
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    Amazingly Sprited by Tri0rvis!​
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    • Passive - Drills into the ground and falls alseep - His Lamp appendage will be off and his Drill Tail below ground.
    • Awake - When in closer range *Deathcoil* will open his eyes and turn on his Lamp and watch you from his position
    • Aggressive - Get too close and he will launch himself out of the ground, Drills (both beak and Tail) will activate and he will chase you down, using both flight and drilling into the ground hiding only to spring free from the ground behind you.
    **Debuffs **
    • Drill Bite -Has a chance to sting - Causing your head to swell and to be *confused* for a few seconds
    • Pollen Punch - Sprays Pollen at you, causing you to sneeze and drop your weapon for a few seconds.
    **Description**
    Deathcoil - Has a fluffy round body covered in dense black hair with yellow diamond shaped patterns.​
    He has a long Drill like Beak that is Bright red as warning to stay away.​
    He has a small appendage hanging from his forhead that has a small glowing bulb attached, which lights up when he feels threatened.​
    He has light delicate wing's that can propel him off the ground, but cannot keep sustained flight.​
    And his most dangerous weapon is his Drill like Tail, which he hides underground to lure unsuspecting victims to their demise. It is also used like a spring to catapult him into the air, and also to dig underground so he can surprise attact you when least expecting it.​
    His eyes glow a violent red which are usually closed, so when you see those Red eyes staring right at you, you know it's time to run!​
    (Side Note: I apologise for my lack of drawing ability, it isn't my strong point, I hope I gave enough of a description for you guys to get an idea)​
    Thanks for reading!​
     
  2. TriOrvis

    TriOrvis Void-Bound Voyager

    Can I assist with pixellating your creation?
    EDIT: By the way, the whole reason I ask this is because I like your idea!
     
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  3. Wow nice artwork!:)
    Is it a pastel?
     
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  4. Tay

    Tay Orbital Explorer

    Go for it! That would be fab:) I could put it in the OP, giving you credit for your skills of course:) I've never tried spriting .. so figured the best way was for me to just doodle my idea:D

    Hahah, well I thank you for your kind words:) Though I feel my *artwork* isn't all that great hehe, it's actually just coloured pencil:)
     
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  5. TriOrvis

    TriOrvis Void-Bound Voyager

    Will do! I'll try my bestest!
     
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  6. Then you have used it very skillfully! The 'ribs' on his body seems almost 3D!o_O
     
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  7. Tay

    Tay Orbital Explorer

    @Tri0rvis, Goodluck! Excited to see what you come up with:)

    @Blind Sniper - *blush* and thank you:)

    You guys are so kind, thanks for the support, I was so scared to even enter the contest. But you've made me feel great, thank you:D
     
  8. TriOrvis

    TriOrvis Void-Bound Voyager

    And here it is: :p
    buzzip.jpg

    How do you like it?:unsure: If you want me to edit anything I can!

    EDIT: Darkened the Bulb in its passive state and removed the extra line in the bottom right corner. Still Got to elongate it!
     
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  9. Tay

    Tay Orbital Explorer

    Oh Wow those look amazing, thank you so much! Seriously well done they are fab:D

    One thing , I imagined him being more oval shaped like in my original drawing stretched out as to show him jumping in his *awake* pose, if you have time to make one showing that look, it would be great, if not no worries, what you've done is simply amazing! Oh and the light bulb maybe make it look a little darker on the *asleep* pose so it looks more like it's off? and maybe remove the one diagonal line of yellow that seems to score through the bottom right diamond shape<3 seriously I love them!!! Thank You Thank YOU!

    May I put it in the OP, with a shout out to you for your work of course:)?
     
  10. TriOrvis

    TriOrvis Void-Bound Voyager

    Haha of course you can! and I'll work on updating it ASAP! :D
     
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  11. Tay

    Tay Orbital Explorer

    Thank you!! Seriously, I feel so honored you made these for me, and made such a fantastic job, from my such awful drawings lol. You Rock!
     
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  12. Tay

    Tay Orbital Explorer

    Updated OP with newer Sprited Image, thanks again TriOrvis:)
     

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