Crossfang's Starbound Workshop

Discussion in 'Fan Art' started by Crossfang, Oct 15, 2015.

  1. Rgbunpro

    Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

    I was gonna suggest photoshop, but I don't know that it's available on tablets.
    As far as grammar goes, I'm gonna stick it in a spoiler so I don't look like a complete ass.

    In panel 1, I'll should be I'd (This is the one I'm most unsure of because it might be a case of 'That's how you say it where I live' In which case, you can ignore it.)
    In panel 2 he says "I've outgrown them" in reference to combat it should be "I've outgrown it."
    In panel 3 he says he doesn't want to be 'in her bad side' (Little weird) Should be 'On her bad side
    In panel 5 he says 'I'm kinda lazy to go' it should probably say 'I'm kinda too lazy to go'
    In panel 6 kniq says 'thanks for giving me this injuries' when it should say 'thanks for giving me these injuries.'

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  2. Crossfang

    Crossfang Oxygen Tank

    So many things wrong in my grammar. I'm so embarrassed. xD
    But that's good!

    Anyway, I think I'm correct on panel 5 though.. "too" is not really my intention there.
    Damn, I really need to double check my writings.. My flaw. xD

    Thanks a loooot btw!
  3. Rgbunpro

    Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

    You're welcome. I usually don't mention it cause most people don't like having their grammar corrected.
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  4. Crossfang

    Crossfang Oxygen Tank

    Not in my case! xD
    Correct me sempai!
  5. BlueShard

    BlueShard Existential Complex

    Can I make a request?
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  6. Crossfang

    Crossfang Oxygen Tank

    Fixed my mistakes! And found a decent app for the texts! Again , thanks to @Rgbunpro for the corrections.


    Boopz 2.1
    After doing all my sdv request.
    Last edited: Apr 15, 2017
  7. Rgbunpro

    Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

    Top keks, also nice job boyo!
  8. BlueShard

    BlueShard Existential Complex

    That's fine, I can wait.
  9. Gearzoid II

    Gearzoid II Starship Captain

    I have a request as well once a slot is open.
  10. Deadmine135

    Deadmine135 Starship Captain

    can i had a request if you done with SD ?

    i dont do this kind of stuff that often hehe.
  11. Rex Blackbeak

    Rex Blackbeak Ketchup Robot

    I was gonna request after you were done with your Stardew Valley requests, but looks like you have many requests after you're done with the SDV one's... Just gonna wwwaaaiiittt.... (。╯3╰。)
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  12. Crossfang

    Crossfang Oxygen Tank

    I'll let everybody know if I'm done. Thanks for being patient. Also , welcome to my thread! xD
  13. Crossfang

    Crossfang Oxygen Tank

    Just want to show you that Crossfang's hair is growing back its supersaiyan form! xD

    It's over 9000!
  14. Rgbunpro

    Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

    And to go...even further beyond!
  15. Firepaw Da Cat

    Firepaw Da Cat Cosmos Killer

    Nice beard! :catbleh:
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  16. BlueShard

    BlueShard Existential Complex

    What even is this :nurugasp:
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  17. Omicron445

    Omicron445 Pangalactic Porcupine

    Gotta go fast?
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  18. Crossfang

    Crossfang Oxygen Tank

    Limitaions only exist if you let them!

    I made a good call of trimming them often then! xD

    A Huran on his Saiyan form. xD

    Haha, dye my hair blue first!
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  19. Rgbunpro

    Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

    For real though, last time we checked my hair is now longer than my mom's. And she has some long hair. My beard has also gotten long enough for me to start braiding it too.
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  20. BlueShard

    BlueShard Existential Complex

    What do you look like I wonder...
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