Im not leaving, but currently im busy whit more important things. Once i have more time, i will try to continue.
I KNOW! I gave him a perfectly good way to get me in, and he never said a WORD about it. I say I'll just start myself off, then. Here I go.. What the heck just happened?! I think as I get up from the floor of the ship. "Our ship was hit with a projectile, sir." says M0k4. Well I know THAT, but what KIND of projectile? And by who? I think in reply. "Miltary grade MK 4 Hyponuclear incendiary missile, sir. Most likely space pirates, or perhaps gang members." she answers (without missing a beat). I look around the ship and see the two other passengers are dead and the control panel's been FLAKKed up bad. DUCKit, I can't fix these components! I'd be better off trying to kill an elephant with a dead kitten... No offense, M0k4. "Sir, I take no offense from your previous statement, but I must warn you it appears we are going to crash. Please brace yourself." (this is the part where someone on the planet says "is that a meteor?" or something to connect this)
(I am thinking about a new thread. Some one of us, probably one that can write very good, should make a new one, until sharazlll... whatever comes back. But if the new one that continues the story does his job good, you know... No offense sarzael, but I mean, look at me! I'm in fu**ing Turkey right now, ON VACATION. And do I have the time to write? Yes I do. Set some priorities for yourself, man. Oh, and I would suggest Marshal duke, or even sir logan (even if he is kinda new), because they write very good, and long texts.) Let's take over! (I have to go now, sailing ) (Oh, and who can't spare ten minutes of timeto write something here?)
Two votes to start new (sorta) Also I wouldn't mind continuing this story, I'm bad at starts, If we get two more votes I will start another thread, Same rules and all that just a little more active. Also cut Sarzael some slack on the English, its not his first language as a Spaniard and English isn't the easiest to learn either, plus his English isn't the worst I've seen... And I've seen some shit, its actually rather good in comparison with other English speakers (most of which being my fellow Americans)... If I end up starting the next one I will (obviously) allow Sarzael to participate in it, its only fair, we don't know or need to know what is specifically going on in his life. EDIT: Prime example of me being bad at starts, Look at my fuggin back story, I drove a tank through a wall to find a shuttle! That's some Van dann shit there!
You have my vote to start a new one. Its not just that i have more important things, but im also inspiration lacking ultimately.
Well, just continue the story in a new thread. You could, if it doesn't take you too much time, copy everything we said into a spoiler in the new thread. Or if it is too much work for you, just start a new one. Either way, I'm in. Edit: The best idea seems to be a new thread, with a new story. Bit we should vote WHO is going to replace the position of sarzael. Someone with some fantasy, someone that can write good, long texts and is almost always available. Please everyone who reads this should give off a vote to whoever he likes to be the new narrator. I vote for Marshall.Duke. You have some humor, and write good. I believe you won't have a lot of trouble thinking up some things for yourself. And I can't really vote for myself, can I?
Actually, i could continue for a bit more, then once everyone together, i would let someone else continue it.
But how come that you have no time? I see you post and make new threads every now and then. So you have time for that?
I know I can do it. I have nothing to do (ever) and I always have my laptop on hand. Im not voting for myself, just saying I can do it.
Perhaps a partnership? I'm getting a job very soon and don't know my hours yet or just how tired I will be, during said times you could take over, or we could also consult with each other for ideas when we run into a wall for the story.
Hey i don't want to be Bummer but here is the thing = We can't go to Jupiter,it's a gas Giant there is no solid surface to land on. Know if your talking about the moon's that's another thing.
Re read it, we did go to a moon. not the planet its self, One of the moons could also have been subject to terraforming, this is a scifi story after all... From here on though it will be a bit more accurate. Space was a favored subject for me. And we wont be staying on that planet for long now that fuzbal has brought a working space ship to it. Just sit tight and let the story unravel. Sir Logan I will start the thread tomorrow unless you wanted to.
everytime I am in one of these, I feel like I am causing a lot of trouble, If we do start a new one I would want to help with it instead of be in it.
Fuzbal you are fine with being in it, just for the love of god stop trying to kill your character by charging at everything head on. A 16 year old isn't going to have much of a physical chance against a space tiger, be more cautious with your character, he is not He-man. Liquid nitrogen isn't going to make your fist hard and weapon like either, its going to freeze it off and your character will go into shock, and upon contact with a solid surface, your fist will shatter. Also stop with the monarchy stuff. All you really need is more characters around you to guide you and prevent you from killing yourself, which is why my character ended up crashing a space shuttle conveniently on the tiger that was about to eat your characters face.
I had to laugh... When will you make the thread? I'm burning to proceed with the story! Edit: You basically described him as a suicidial morron that wants a monarchy. But it made me laugh so hard...
Keep this thread up for now, Ill link it and eventually transfer all of the character profiles to the new thread. EDIT: Also its obvious hes young and a little new to the whole RP concept, I am fine with this, I remember when I first tried to RP and I was much worse than he was. He just needs a little help and a push in the right direction.
