RP A ship lost in space

Name: Bob
Appearance:
Race: Floran
Gender: Male
Age: 35
Occupation: Tribesperson.
Personal History: Bob lived in a Floran village then some glitch arrived and taught him space travel so he went in a spaceship and a year later randomly landed on the stardust to get some fuel then when the ship deactivated Bob was in his spaceship oblivious after a while he came out to a deactivated ship.
Hobbies: stabby stabby, flying around shooting stuff, hunting, and exploring.
Skills: unexpectedly became a good marksman simply by shooting things, also very enthusiastic and hard to get down.
Fears: Hylotl Bob had bad experiences in past.
Personality: enthusiastic

 

Take this out and put it in the OOC. That's what it is for. Also, can't you make anything that doesn't take you less than a minute to type? I mean seriously, rp GM's accept people that put time into their work. It shows a kind of dedication. If you are going to be applying for rp's, then I suggest reading the forum rules first.

 

(OOC, how many guys are shooting me?)

 

(probably most are focused on Torlax, while you are picking off people w/your sniper)

 

((he actually has a AR most likely, and there are probably 20 or so people shooting at both of us split up, I took out 4 so 16 remaining unless I completely forgot that you took out one or two.))
EDIT: legitimate props to crits for his post about putting work and thought into your character... Thank you, twas beautiful.

 

((Alright thanks.))
With the raiders distracted, Jackson was able to fire off a few bursts.

 

Almost as if an afterthought, Jackson checked his pouches, and found a grenade inside. He quickly threw it into the biggest cluster of raiders, and hit the deck.

 

((There's probably something more like 4 left now, I doubt these guys are going to be a challenge :] )) As soon as the remaining enemies realized that their numbers have been cut down they start to move towards the door to hopefully outrun this group and screw the others. Torlax quickly draws his pistol and shoots the last one going out the door in the leg, but the others made it out. "Crap, Jackson go after them. I'll take care of this guy".

 

Jackson muttered an affirmative, and ran after the raiders, gun trained on their last position.

 

As soon as Jackson stepped into the hallway, he was immediately barraged by plasma and bullet fire.
Taking cover behind a doorframe, he blindly fired into the hallway, hitting two of the raiders.
When the last ran out of ammo, Jackson quickly fired a three-round burst into the heart.
As the last raider fell backwards, Jackson turned his head back into the room.
"Clear!"

 

As Torlax stomps on the arm of the one he shot in the leg earlier he quickly replies in a stiff tone "Solid, let's get the remainders tied up and search the ship for any surviving crew and/or civilians" He pulls the guys hair while holding his head up and whispers into his ear "You're going away for a VERY long time" with an upstanding emphasis on the VERY in that sentence.