☆ The Space Pirates - Scourge of the stars, Bandits of Mars. ☆

Discussion in 'Hangout Threads' started by Steam Pirate, May 23, 2012.

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  1. Argthrond

    Argthrond Oxygen Tank

    Post funny pictures, you always can do that! :DD
     
  2. Damuranashi

    Damuranashi Existential Complex

    Yeah... it was very simple and vague. I can write a better creepypasta, in fact, I'm going to post it here.
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    There is it! Its perfect!
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  3. creepwolf

    creepwolf Giant Laser Beams

  4. Damuranashi

    Damuranashi Existential Complex

    I don't know, your sence of humor and my sence of humor is very different.
     
  5. Argthrond

    Argthrond Oxygen Tank

    Is it really? Post something, and I'll say if I liked it or not.
     
  6. Damuranashi

    Damuranashi Existential Complex

    ...I can't think in anything right now. And when I say anything, I mean anything :lolwut:
     
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  7. Valen

    Valen Pangalactic Porcupine

    Time for some eyes-closed dreamy dramy shimsham time.
     
  8. Damuranashi

    Damuranashi Existential Complex


    Man, I just remembered this song!
     
  9. Lobo

    Lobo Spaceman Spiff

    busy day...
    But I made some neat stuff! :D
     
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  10. Damuranashi

    Damuranashi Existential Complex

    I just finished reading Funnymouth, good creepypasta, bad ending.
     
  11. Damuranashi

    Damuranashi Existential Complex

    Good night everybody!
     
  12. Argthrond

    Argthrond Oxygen Tank

    Good night! :p
     
  13. Ravenous Space Rat

    Ravenous Space Rat Cosmic Narwhal

    What was bad about the ending?
     
  14. Damuranashi

    Damuranashi Existential Complex

    First, Good day everybody.
    I didn't like the ending because it was too predictible and cliché, the part when the fingers start to grab his face was very good, I thought that it was going to kill him and make him look like that picture. Alright, it didn't kill him, it good, but the guy just become a reterdad troll like Funnymouth. I personally like the creepypastas with endings where the monster or anything is spreading, but in this one, I didn't.
     
  15. Ravenous Space Rat

    Ravenous Space Rat Cosmic Narwhal

    That is the scary part though.
    Also you didn't explain why you hated it.
    From what I can tell you hate it because he became a insane(Reterdad?) troll Funnymouth guy?
     
  16. Damuranashi

    Damuranashi Existential Complex

    I didn't say that I hate it, I just didn't like it, I expected more. The creepypasta was very good, it was nervous while I was reading it, even I had to look at the window a few times.
    Wait... I wrote "Reterdad" :rofl:
    Ok, back to the topic. The part I didn't like was this one:

    * lemonlimeskull has joined #ReferSales.
    lemonlimeskull: I see your handsome face.
    lemonlimeskull: Don't be so sad about it!
    lemonlimeskull: :)
    GhostJeorge: Hey, where the fuck were you?
    GhostJeorge: hello? Charles?
    GhostJeorge: ...
    lemonlimeskull: O)_(O
    * lemonlimeskull has left #ReferSales.

    Its just simple, it would be perfect if it just ended in the part when he became a funnymouth. Kinda like it because its spreading, but its just too simple.
     
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  17. Damuranashi

    Damuranashi Existential Complex

    Slow day huh?
     
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  19. Roxie Stables

    Roxie Stables Parsec Taste Tester

    There wasn't even a page of comments over night.
     
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  20. If you want I can just continue in this direction

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