Heh, I'm an avid reader as well, which is what helped me greatly. I'm partial to a wide variety of authors and genres, so I've had the chance to study the way in which they craft, shape, and tell their stories. And your work isn't bad, it just needs a bit of finesse and editing. Remember, you only get better with practice, so keep on working and looking for ways to improve.
Thanks, I have been reading yours and trying to improve mine little by little also you and everyone else have been helping me improve my story and make them into what it is forming into again a big thank you.
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