Poem The Little Tiy

Hello everybody, I just saw this contest and thought I'd enter... I would've drawn something but my scanner doesn't work, so here's a poem instead:

There was once a little Tiy
He worked on an awesome game, oh my!
So he made a team of seven men
and the base was located in the country of Big Ben!
Then Christmas came, and with that a contest, too
the snow was so white, and the sky was so blue!
The winter wind came, so cold on my chin
and this contest I'll enter, hopefully I'll win!

Thank you for reading.

 

This reads to me like a nursery rhyme. (Not childish, just an even rhythm that is easy to remember)

I approve!

 

It was supposed to be a little childish
And thank you!

 

I just wanted to clearly say what I meant! Every poem has a niche, and this one fits perfectly.

Best of luck to you!

 

Thanks alot to you