Story Edward The World Hero

Bughunter did mention this was a work-in-progress.
That said, yeah, he's about 600 words shy of the 2 000 word marker (not maximum, mind you), so it's in his best interest to include either the holiday or winter themes -- or both -- soon, if he's to be eligible. Though he definitely has Starbound references, I doubt that's enough to stay in the running. (Then again, what do I know?)
Anywho, Bughunter, two things you want to keep in mind while continuing the story. First, you're changing tenses, sometimes within the same sentence. For example:

Bolded for emphasis. The tense mix-ups are a bit startling, so I'd suggest clearing that up.
Second, your opening sentences. They repeat, giving the impression of either redundancy or oversight. Here:

 

You will see that is why its still

 

As long as the finished product is going to be better, I suppose.

Good luck.

 

Apparently you can't spell. It's grammar not grammer. And, the story is not finished, so the period is not there .

 

Just leave them be... don't stir up a nest of bees

 

I wouldn't be talking about grammar if I were you.

 

Whoops. Seems that I only made one mistake, Chimera, but your picture looks like a mistake. (Just Kidding) (LOLWUT?)