Crossfang's Starbound Workshop (Hiatus)

Discussion in 'Fan Art' started by Crossfang, Oct 15, 2015.

  1. Rex Blackbeak

    Rex Blackbeak Spaceman Spiff

    Crossfang da xD Master! 〜( ̄▽ ̄〜)
     
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  2. Rgbunpro

    Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

    Lol poor kniq. I like this, as for the text, is your computer still broke? Also the grammar could use a little work, but I understand if you don't wanna hear about that. Some people are really touchy about their grammar.
     
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  3. Crossfang

    Crossfang Supernova

    Yes it's still broken.. and I dont want to buy a new one as of now , or fix it.. xD

    No no no! I do want to hear any kind of feedback! It's good that I could be aware of my weaknesses .
    Can you point out the things that should be fixed grammatically?
    As I said before, I do like to be criticized in my works, it helps me improve .
     
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  4. Rgbunpro

    Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

    I was gonna suggest photoshop, but I don't know that it's available on tablets.
    As far as grammar goes, I'm gonna stick it in a spoiler so I don't look like a complete ass.


    In panel 1, I'll should be I'd (This is the one I'm most unsure of because it might be a case of 'That's how you say it where I live' In which case, you can ignore it.)
    In panel 2 he says "I've outgrown them" in reference to combat it should be "I've outgrown it."
    In panel 3 he says he doesn't want to be 'in her bad side' (Little weird) Should be 'On her bad side
    In panel 5 he says 'I'm kinda lazy to go' it should probably say 'I'm kinda too lazy to go'
    In panel 6 kniq says 'thanks for giving me this injuries' when it should say 'thanks for giving me these injuries.'

     
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  5. Crossfang

    Crossfang Supernova

    *blushes*
    So many things wrong in my grammar. I'm so embarrassed. xD
    But that's good!

    Anyway, I think I'm correct on panel 5 though.. "too" is not really my intention there.
    Damn, I really need to double check my writings.. My flaw. xD

    Thanks a loooot btw!
     
  6. Rgbunpro

    Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

    You're welcome. I usually don't mention it cause most people don't like having their grammar corrected.
     
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  7. Crossfang

    Crossfang Supernova

    Not in my case! xD
    Correct me sempai!
     
  8. BlueShard

    BlueShard Giant Laser Beams

    Can I make a request?
     
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  9. Crossfang

    Crossfang Supernova

    Fixed my mistakes! And found a decent app for the texts! Again , thanks to @Rgbunpro for the corrections.


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    Boopz 2.1
    After doing all my sdv request.
     
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  10. Rgbunpro

    Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

    Top keks, also nice job boyo!
     
  11. BlueShard

    BlueShard Giant Laser Beams

    That's fine, I can wait.
     
  12. Gearzoid II

    Gearzoid II Big Damn Hero

    I have a request as well once a slot is open.
     
  13. Deadmine135

    Deadmine135 Big Damn Hero

    can i had a request if you done with SD ?


    i dont do this kind of stuff that often hehe.
     
  14. Rex Blackbeak

    Rex Blackbeak Spaceman Spiff

    I was gonna request after you were done with your Stardew Valley requests, but looks like you have many requests after you're done with the SDV one's... Just gonna wwwaaaiiittt.... (。╯3╰。)
     
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  15. Crossfang

    Crossfang Supernova

    I'll let everybody know if I'm done. Thanks for being patient. Also , welcome to my thread! xD
     
  16. Crossfang

    Crossfang Supernova

    Just want to show you that Crossfang's hair is growing back again...to its supersaiyan form! xD


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    It's over 9000!
     
  17. Rgbunpro

    Rgbunpro Cosmos Killer

    And this...is to go...even further beyond!
     
  18. Firepaw Da Cat

    Firepaw Da Cat The Fluffy Cat

    Nice beard! :catbleh:
     
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  19. BlueShard

    BlueShard Giant Laser Beams

    What even is this :nurugasp:
     
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  20. Omicron445

    Omicron445 Pangalactic Porcupine

    Gotta go fast?
     
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