Between Blood, The Stars, and The Heart - An Avali/Starbound Fanfiction

Discussion in 'Writing' started by Gilligan Lanley, Mar 14, 2016.

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What will the name of the Story be?

Poll closed Mar 17, 2016.
  1. Current Place Holder Title

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  2. Adventures of the Lone Avali

    46.2%
  3. DoaLA: Retold

    15.4%
  4. Between Blood, The Stars, and The Heart

    76.9%
  5. The Skyfire Chronicles

    38.5%
Multiple votes are allowed.
  1. hypergen8

    hypergen8 Guest

    Agreed! Happy for the reboot!
     
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  2. hypergen8

    hypergen8 Guest

    btw The Official Avali Wiki's link to this goes to Diary of a lone Avali not this,
     
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  3. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    I didn't post the link to this one, just Diary of a Lone Avali. o:
     
  4. Lodish

    Lodish Black Hole Surfer

    Might as well keep the old one and add the new thread right after
     
  5. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    Bit of an update on my hiatus:

    Soooo, after plunging myself into the lovely MMO world I've decided that I spent maybe a bit too much time playing Final Fantasy 14: Heavensward. I will, however, be resuming writing and should have something new to post within the next few days! Sorry to keep everyone waiting ^.^;
     
  6. Lodish

    Lodish Black Hole Surfer

    FINALLY- oh wait I thought you would post an update :C
    I can wait a few days anyway :3
    Oh, and I can't blame you for playing Final Fantasy, I spent too many time on these to blame you in any way
     
  7. hypergen8

    hypergen8 Guest

    Hows writing going?
     
  8. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    A bit of a hiatus. Real life has me yanked away from the computer long periods of time so I haven't had much time for writing. :c
     
  9. hypergen8

    hypergen8 Guest

    Don't worry take your time!
     
  10. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    Eureka! I have been struck by the proverbial inspiration lightning and have begun rewriting the newest chapter!

    PS: Nezun is uber adorable in this chapter me tinks.
     
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  11. Ponamis

    Ponamis Title Not Found

    So it's just going to be a new version of the prologue? No new chapter?
    Don't worry, I'm not complaining! I'm glad you're doing something new, I just want to clarify this. :nurutease:
     
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  12. Lodish

    Lodish Black Hole Surfer

    Hooray! \o/
     
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  13. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    I had already started writing a new chapter, but lost my imaginative drive in the process. As such, I've begun rewriting the chapter; making a few changes here and there to what I already had written and continuing onward from what I had already wrote. :nuruhappy:
     
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  14. hypergen8

    hypergen8 Guest

    Me when i saw you in my alerts [​IMG]
    Mine?
     
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  15. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    It's done! Waiting to hear back from proofreaders, and it'll be up asap. Thanks again for all of your patience on the newest chapter!
    --- Post updated ---
    Aaaand chapter 1 is up! Hope you guys enjoy it! ^.^
     
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  16. Lodish

    Lodish Black Hole Surfer

    That was an awesome chapter, I'm waiting to se more ^o^
     
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  17. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Coming back to this thread and seeing all my comments actually made me cringe.

    Any how, the new chapter is interesting.
    I have a couple of gripes, Nezuns is not human is she, Doesn't her race dislike humans, Why is she using human swears?

    AND WHY DOES SHE HAVE BRITISH ACCENT?!
     
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  18. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    Nezun is not a human. Avali don't hate humans; to my knowledge, and she's using human swear 'cause I can't think of something creative to use for swear words for Avali at the moment. Will change if I do. X3
    As well, about the English accent; I DIDN'T THINK OF IT... MUST REWORK THE WHOLE THING AGAIN FOR BRITISH BABES!
     
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  19. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Wasn't being serious about Nezuns being a human.
    I never said hate, I said dislike. The lore I read is from the Creator. So I would know.

    I have a feeling Nezun had some human encounters.
    But it's somewhat of a plot hole until more information is given.
     
  20. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    O7

    Plot holes are meant to be filled. How soon is the question. c:
     
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