Diary of a Lone Avali [Discontinued]

Discussion in 'Writing' started by Gilligan Lanley, Dec 20, 2015.

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What's your opinion of the story so far?

  1. Great!

    66.7%
  2. Okay.

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  3. Decent..

    5.6%
  4. Needs more work.

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  5. GIB MEH MOAR!!!

    38.9%
  6. Pinapple (You know who you are <3)

    22.2%
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  1. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    I know ya was fool'in. But i just had to do it.

    Who knows...maybe...the others were...[stop it myself, PLEASE], then told [STOP TO LEWD]
     
  2. Firepaw Da Cat

    Firepaw Da Cat The Fluffy Cat

    Hey, maybe not everybody hopes that? [​IMG]
     
  3. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    Indeed :nuruwink:
    But for the sake of the forum rules, it was made that way. :nurusnooze:
     
  4. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    I hope it was.:rolleyes:
    I would not want to see the you know what unfold.
     
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  5. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    Not sure if that plant pun was intentional or not...:nurudapper:
     
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  6. Firepaw Da Cat

    Firepaw Da Cat The Fluffy Cat

    I knoow, I was just joking [​IMG]

    Or was I?
     
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  7. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    It was not. Im not sure how there is a plant pun in there.
     
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  8. Firepaw Da Cat

    Firepaw Da Cat The Fluffy Cat

    I think he took the part about unfolding to be a pun
     
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  9. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Not sure how unfolding is a pun. Maybe he sees something that i don't?
     
  10. Relten

    Relten The Waste of Time

    So, when's the next entry coming out?
     
  11. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    Like how a flower unfolds it's petals in the morning, 'cause Mira is a plant person.. and flower.. and ... PG13... I'll show myself out.

    Soon! Working on it now, actually. Got distracted with a youtube video my friend sent me. X3
     
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  12. Firepaw Da Cat

    Firepaw Da Cat The Fluffy Cat

    I guess because flowers unfold their petals and-
    Yeah, that's what I was going to say
     
  13. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    But.....but.......hold on........flowers bloom. Bahh, what eva im going back to the cave.
     
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  14. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Haha. keeping it pg-13.

    EDIT: Unfold meaning nude mea-
    Man i think im over thinking things.
     
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  15. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    My how I've failed at that attempt, kinda. :rofl:
     
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  16. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Edited the post.
     
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  17. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

    Thar we go! Hahaha
     
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  18. Gilligan Lanley

    Gilligan Lanley Space Kumquat

  19. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Implications. *Magical text appears* IMPLICATIONS.
     
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  20. Master Automan IV

    Master Automan IV Phantasmal Quasar

    Eh, excuse me madam, it looks like you dropped your youtube video.
    Here you go Ms. Nezun.

    EDIT: I gotta snooze. See ya tomorrow, whenever i decide to get up that is.

    EDIT 2.0: Before i snooze, let me say this post has something to do with my character.
    And i won't tell you until i wake up. *maniacal laugh*
     
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