Story One long journey of The Green Lance

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Warget, Jul 21, 2015.

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Wanna hear more about The Green Lance's crew?

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  2. Nope!

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  3. No violence, language, etc and you got my vote!

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  4. Why did you do this to poor Ol' Crookbrand? T^T

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  1. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    Guys, can you give me an advice? I feel like I MUST read the stuff others writes, but when I try, I just can't read it longer than 1 minute... =( What should I do?
     
  2. Biirdy Daysleeper

    Biirdy Daysleeper Weight of the Sky

    Very interesting stories, I'm too tired to make a critic but in simple words, it's great. ^-^
     
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  3. Shador

    Shador Subatomic Cosmonaut

    Great story, but i heve a suggestion. I think u schould add the mysterious-ark-plague-thing...not in the next text, but don´t forget about it.

    And please, don´t stop writing like many others who´s story i was following. This one has more potential then anyone could ever imagine,
    I swear by my penguin fin.
     
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  4. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    mysterious-ark-plague-thing? Im not sure what you was meant... Like zombie or black plague (i mean contageous disease)?
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    Oh, you want an epidemy story, right?
     
  5. Shador

    Shador Subatomic Cosmonaut

    Yeah, exactly! And maybe the bad guy (What was his name again?) could be sent from an devil-base creature to kill people/novakids/whatever to satisfy the devil-based thing

    FEEDBACK LVL 99999999999
     
  6. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    Well... This could definetelly happen in the future. I think we even will se some old characters in there =)
     
  7. Shador

    Shador Subatomic Cosmonaut

    Read the edit of my previous answer
     
  8. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    Im not sure if stuff could go THIS satanic...
    Also, my dream is to make my stories become the game lore. If this happens, I will jump around all day long! (And of cource to make this happen it must be in game logic and have a big impact on people)
     
  9. Shador

    Shador Subatomic Cosmonaut

    If this happens, u should :D[DOUBLEPOST=1439294217][/DOUBLEPOST]
    Then, maybe you should read the in-game Books and take inspiration, so People could say "Hey, i have read about this in-game! Cool!"
     
  10. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    Im Imagining to get able to enter the Green Lance at it's stay above the outpost...
     
  11. Shador

    Shador Subatomic Cosmonaut

    Maybe you should make the Green Lance need something and the only way to get it is to make the Erchius-mission to get the crystals to give them to someone to give them what they need...
     
  12. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    Also, about the erchius.... I planned our crew to use it's crystals as a gunpowder, activating them with a short circuit inside the gun. >_>
    So they will need some of them...
     
  13. Shador

    Shador Subatomic Cosmonaut

    And maybe one of the crew will be kidnapped so they have to do the Floran-mission too...
     
  14. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    I had some other plans fot the Floran-related story... (Also, as I know Chuckles planned to change it from kidnapping to willingly joining the hunt.. .With the big ugly spider boss)
     
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  15. Peppersnap

    Peppersnap Big Damn Hero

    peppu read ssstory ①!
    sssome thing, peppu not underssstand. is kay-o.
    peppu feel sssad. :<
    bite casssa! ssst!! >:I

    will read more sssoon. :’3
     
  16. Alkanthe

    Alkanthe Supernova

    Yes! Bite Cassa!
     
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  17. Peppersnap

    Peppersnap Big Damn Hero

    bite bite bite! like bite! >:3
    oh. but only food. oh... mmm. alssso bads.
    bite bite bite bads. >:I

    mmm... in sssay hi hi thread... talk? talk sssay bite novi be bad.
    sssay... burn mouth. but want bite casssa. sssad. :<
     
  18. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    Try to stab him. It could work even better.
     
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  19. Peppersnap

    Peppersnap Big Damn Hero

    mmm... not like ssstab ssso much.
    sssmash better! ssstab kay-o. :3
     
  20. Warget

    Warget Giant Laser Beams

    If you say so.
     
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