Digital A Floran Story (Starbound Webcomic) - Hiatus

Discussion in 'Fan Art' started by Iskiribbles, May 20, 2015.

  1. Iskiribbles

    Iskiribbles Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    (Im happy to show you guys a project ive been doing/planning lately. I'm making a starbound webcomic!! I figured it would be a fun thing to do on the side. Updates will be once a week on this thread, every wednesday! Here's the Prologue, schedule will start 3 of June ( in 2 weeks)
    Enjoy and thanks for reading. :kitten2: )




    In an arid planet somewhere in the galaxy..
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    Act 1 - Cover (reduced size).png Act 1 - Page 1 (reduced size).png Act 1 - Page 2 (reduced size).png


    Character sheet- kid floran (version 1).png
    An early Character sheet of our lil protagonist! More details about them will be added later on as the story progresses.

    Species: Floran

    Gender: Agender (they/their)

    Name: ??? (Still yet to be revealed)

    Age: Between 9-14 (human) years old.

    Height: 1.30 meters (including hair)

    SHORT DESCRIPTION: A very temperamental child, believes and admires strength. A bit lazy but determined and stubborn when focused on a task. Although agressive and hungry for flesh , they will not eat those who they respect and bonds.
     
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  2. deliriousbiznasty

    deliriousbiznasty Pangalactic Porcupine

    so exciting!!!!!!!!!!!! :giggle:
     
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  3. River King

    River King Big Damn Hero

    Those colors yet again amazing and I hate orange, excited to see how your story unfolds.>~<
     
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  4. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    Ooh! I wonder what that little fuzzball on the ground is? Very beautiful picture! I love the cell shading!
     
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  5. oraserat

    oraserat Cosmic Narwhal

    I love the colour scheme
     
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  6. Iskiribbles

    Iskiribbles Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    Heh , i should be proud then for making you like this orange.[DOUBLEPOST=1432244189][/DOUBLEPOST]
    I wonder indeed :D[DOUBLEPOST=1432244313][/DOUBLEPOST]
    Thanks you, im happy to hear people like the colors on these pages :DD
     
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  7. Vurrunna

    Vurrunna Giant Laser Beams

    Wow. That's pretty amazing.

    Speaking from my artistic mind now: I really like how this first part portrays the story via simplistic images without any dialogue whatsoever. Whether or not dialogue comes into play (I don't know what you plan to do, so I can't make predictions just yet), I think this has a really cool style to it as is; the only words present are written in a sort of unclean way, which plays interestingly in contrast with the clean images (this is good, by the way). I only have one suggestion (feel free to shrug it off if it conflicts with your ideas), which is that if you do include dialogue, it would look interesting in a 'special' font like the "to be continued" at the end (even more interesting would be individual fonts for separate characters).

    Of course, that's only a suggestion; I'm sure you have your own things in mind, and I don't want to say you need to do what I want (certainly not while I don't even know what's in store!). I'll stay tuned on this comic for sure.

    Keep up the good work!
     
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  8. Vurrunna

    Vurrunna Giant Laser Beams

    Sooo... Wednesday? Comic? Pretty please?
     
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  9. deliriousbiznasty

    deliriousbiznasty Pangalactic Porcupine

    the schedule starts 3rd of july :)
     
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  10. Kaiachi

    Kaiachi Tiy's Beard

    I can't wait to see more! It's so stunning, and leaves so much for the mind to speculate.
     
  11. Iskiribbles

    Iskiribbles Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    Thanks! This is very good feedback. :D[DOUBLEPOST=1432817681][/DOUBLEPOST]
    Thank you! Only a week left. :kitten:
     
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  12. Vurrunna

    Vurrunna Giant Laser Beams

    ... I feel stupid. :p

    June 3rd cant't come soon enough; end of school AND a new comic! (Not the end of the comic, I meant--well, you know what I mean.)
     
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  13. Model QT-377665

    Model QT-377665 Ketchup Robot

    I'm watching this thread, you're going places with this.
     
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  14. Cryostratos

    Cryostratos Phantasmal Quasar

    I'm monitoring this too.
     
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  15. Zaisher

    Zaisher Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    starting off with a corpse? and a floran one at that? GET OUT OF MY MIND!!!!
     
  16. Vurrunna

    Vurrunna Giant Laser Beams

    He looks more unconscious to me... Who knows; maybe the main character dies before the story begins! Although I'd assume that would happen in more of an in medias res situation, where it happens at the middle or end. Being as this is a prologue, which happens before the story begins, I'd just go with unconscious.
     
  17. Iskiribbles

    Iskiribbles Scruffy Nerf-Herder

    ACT I
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    ((blup blup intensifies))
     
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  19. Jareix Cryvix

    Jareix Cryvix The Waste of Time

    Wait a minute... Are they at the ark?! (o_O)
     
  20. deliriousbiznasty

    deliriousbiznasty Pangalactic Porcupine

    i love the colors ;u;
     
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