(Im happy to show you guys a project ive been doing/planning lately. I'm making a starbound webcomic!! I figured it would be a fun thing to do on the side. Updates will be once a week on this thread, every wednesday! Here's the Prologue, schedule will start 3 of June ( in 2 weeks) Enjoy and thanks for reading. ) In an arid planet somewhere in the galaxy.. An early Character sheet of our lil protagonist! More details about them will be added later on as the story progresses. Species: Floran Gender: Agender (they/their) Name: ??? (Still yet to be revealed) Age: Between 9-14 (human) years old. Height: 1.30 meters (including hair) SHORT DESCRIPTION: A very temperamental child, believes and admires strength. A bit lazy but determined and stubborn when focused on a task. Although agressive and hungry for flesh , they will not eat those who they respect and bonds.
Ooh! I wonder what that little fuzzball on the ground is? Very beautiful picture! I love the cell shading!
Heh , i should be proud then for making you like this orange.[DOUBLEPOST=1432244189][/DOUBLEPOST] I wonder indeed [DOUBLEPOST=1432244313][/DOUBLEPOST] Thanks you, im happy to hear people like the colors on these pages
Wow. That's pretty amazing. Speaking from my artistic mind now: I really like how this first part portrays the story via simplistic images without any dialogue whatsoever. Whether or not dialogue comes into play (I don't know what you plan to do, so I can't make predictions just yet), I think this has a really cool style to it as is; the only words present are written in a sort of unclean way, which plays interestingly in contrast with the clean images (this is good, by the way). I only have one suggestion (feel free to shrug it off if it conflicts with your ideas), which is that if you do include dialogue, it would look interesting in a 'special' font like the "to be continued" at the end (even more interesting would be individual fonts for separate characters). Of course, that's only a suggestion; I'm sure you have your own things in mind, and I don't want to say you need to do what I want (certainly not while I don't even know what's in store!). I'll stay tuned on this comic for sure. Keep up the good work!
Thanks! This is very good feedback. [DOUBLEPOST=1432817681][/DOUBLEPOST] Thank you! Only a week left.
... I feel stupid. June 3rd cant't come soon enough; end of school AND a new comic! (Not the end of the comic, I meant--well, you know what I mean.)
He looks more unconscious to me... Who knows; maybe the main character dies before the story begins! Although I'd assume that would happen in more of an in medias res situation, where it happens at the middle or end. Being as this is a prologue, which happens before the story begins, I'd just go with unconscious.