I love how you guys seem to care about this as much as I do.
I just did a check of a couple things, and noticed these.
In the monster log entry for Lemurian.
"Around 7' tall, with scaley skin not different from that of a lizard."
How about?
"Around 7' tall, with scaly skin, not different from that of a lizard."
In the item log order description for Fire Shield
"After taking more then 10% of your health as damage, explode for 200% damage. "
The error is caused by not pronouncing similar words with subtle differences.
"After taking more than 10% of your health as damage, explode for 200% damage. "
Disposable Missile Launcher:
some of the rounds have been observed to explode by itself.
should be
some of the rounds have been observed to explode by themselves .
or maybe even
some of the rounds have been observed to explode by their own accord .
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Wouldn't that be ' of their own accord'?
Heaven Cracker:
Can be used for both manual drilling, or swap to laser-mode to fire a mining laser instead.
(...)
Why I'm bother telling you all this is beyond me.
should be
Can be used for manual drilling, or swap to laser-mode to fire a mining laser instead.
(...)
Why I bother telling you all this is beyond me.
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Often times, I make mistakes by starting to type in one way, and ending in another.
How about?
"Why I'm bothering to tell you all this is beyond me."
EDIT: Well, I messed that up. It's mostly fixed, but the indent tags seem to be buggy.
In the item log entry for Concussion Grenade
"Fires pellets intended for stunning, not for killing ! SWAT teams will kill for these, but any men you have on the field should use fragmentation grenades instead."
This one has been bugging me for a while. I'm not quite sure how to fix it, though.
Also, I hate how the forums parse multiple spaces so that I can't double space after a period. Especially since the game seems to use fixed width fonts. Double spacing after a period is recommended if you use a fixed width font. If you don't use such a font, I'll be the only person that single spaces will bother.