Avali Nexus (Substitute MK. II) Ten threads and counting!

//.....Thinking about it it sounds gross a bit....

 

((Hue. Anyways...wait where the hell is catotter/lone now))

 

She has a OOC voice now.

 

((well then.))

 

// i'll be leaving right about now.

 

((Later gonz
don't ehksplode.))

 

// You have a weird obsession with adding 'Ehks' infront of words that have a 'X' or a 'Ex' don't you?

 

((it's not an obsession
i've actually started writing "ehks" instead of "ex" because puns but then it evolved into an automatic thing.))

 

I realized something in my language arts class, the hypothetical articles that were provided with our standardized essay prompt to give us something to draw facts and quotes for our essay from, were of such low quality that some of the students themselves could probably do better

 

// What's next? Reks saying
Get fucking Reked!

 

((That's just pathetic.))

((i will end you.))

 

// But it's opposite day

 

((no it's not
it's spooky day get your holidays right. SPEAKING OF HOLIDAYS IC TIME))
*After...stuff happened, I left the room to see what was going on. I actually wondered what day it was back on Earth myself. A quick check with my neural jack showed me...
...
Oh.
It was halloween. Huh. Maybe I should celebrate? Hm...*

 

I had such a difficult time trying to produce a coherent argument from any of them that I wound up grading them instead of using them, to summarize the first one at best had a loose connection to it's own topic, made no counterarguments, and what arguments it did make were downright pathetic. The second flowed about as well as sandpaper, made no arguments either way and simply spouted facts assuming their general relation meant there was no need to tie them together, and the third avoided being anything but vague, again lacked counterarguments, and was bursting at the seams with forced enthusiasm

 

look at dem weapons bay, Vector Thrust includes a well designed stealth mechanic.

 

((I have never felt more disappointed in the american educational system than i do right now.))

 

{I need to abort my arc anyways, it's been on hold for too long.}

 

It really was written at a student level

 

// Now we have to sing Nightmare before christmas songs ,I'll start
*Walks outside* Boys and girls of every age
*walks out as well* Wouldn't you like to see something strange?
*floats down* Come with us and you will see this,our town of Halloween!

 

((Well it's not like it' impossible to say "Okay exploration done back to the planet we haven't been there in a while"))

...
This isn't a musical.